There are literally thousands of secondary essays put out by medical schools each and every year. But most of those essays can be subdivided into specific categories and dealt with in groups. In this blog, we’re discussing the ‘diversity’ category.


DEFINITION OF THE DIVERSITY CATEGORY


Any medical school secondary essay which either asks how your unique experience as a part of a subculture has influenced the way you intend to approach medicine, OR how your exposure to a particular subculture has influenced the way you intend to approach medicine. The focus should be not on your particular opinions of the subculture, but rather on your lived experiences and how they landed on you, personally. Avoid attempts to universalize and reach beyond yourself -- instead, stay focused on what you have directly experienced, and analzye how it has affected you.


EXAMPLES OF SECONDARY PROMPTS IN THE DIVERSITY CATEGORY


 Mt. Sinai MD 2017 1 What makes you unique, someone who will add to the Mount Sinai community? (Suggested 250 words or less) 250 words
New York University School of Medicine MD 2017 3 What unique qualities or experiences do you possess that would contribute specifically to the NYU School of Medicine community? 2500 characters
Northwestern University Feinberg School of Medicine MD 2017 6 If you wish, use this space to provide more detail about your selections above and how you would bring diversity to the Northwestern community. 250 words
Oregon Health & Science University School of Medicine MD 2017 1 What experience have you had that has given you insight into the patients you hope to eventually serve? 1500 characters


TECHNIQUE FOR ANSWERING THE DIVERSITY CATEGORY

Most people think they know what a diversity essay is -- in their minds, they translate diversity to 'belonging to an ethnic or gender minority', figure out which box they think they fit into, and write accordingly. But this is a dramatic oversimplification of what elite medical schools mean by diversity.

You can write a diversity essay about any quality under the sun that is outside your direct control, for which you were silently judged, categorized, stereotyped or evaluated by others.  Perhaps it's the area of the world you grew up in, the number of siblings you had, a disability you had to deal with, or simply how incredibly short you were!  You can write about being poor, or even about being rich!

If you just can't think of anything at all that sets you apart, think again.

If you still can't think of anything at all that sets you apart, then you can write an essay about being exposed to diversity. This type of essay covers a discrete moment, or period, where you encountered a person or group of people belonging to any type of subculture which faces discrimination and prejudice. Exposure to diversity essays should be about how, over time, you grew to understand the deeper nature of your new friends' struggles, and ... this is key ... how you CHANGED because of it. No change, no essay. Change must be concrete -- IE, something you actually did differently as a result of the experience.

One common failing of these types of essays happens when you feel like you have to show off or prevent yourself from looking bad by avoiding admitting anything you think might make you look insensitive. But without mistakes, there can be no growth -- so if you want to write a great essay, your attitudes at the beginning must be markedly different from your attitudes at the end.

Another thing that makes a diversity essay really work is a strong focus on characters and settings. Giving detailed and interesting descriptions can really bring your essay to life on the page, plus, it shows you have really taken the time to think through your experiences.

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